In my original draft story I included a Narrative of me talking about my topic, as well as an interview of my friend talking about her experience that was similar to my experience. That has always been my idea process for this project. My first thought was that I wanted to do more interviews with people that had similar stories, but finding multiple people to interview was a struggle. After receiving my feedback I had to make many changes. I had to cut the parts out where there was no talking and random background noise which it sound more put together. I also decided to recreate and re-record my whole narrative part and the beginning of my interview to make it sound more uplifting, because my voice was more monotone and boring in my first draft. I wanted it to overall sound more of like a podcast rather than it sounding very scripted. In order to do this I just spoke from my mind and my thoughts to make it sound more natural instead of writing a whole script. I chose to keep the same narrative part because I thought it was strong useful information. I wanted to find more people to interview but I couldn’t because it was hard to find people that had a similar story, even though I did think that more interviews would have been more useful. I also decided that I wanted to include the chime noise in the beginning as more of a “starting noise” to my podcast, and also at the end I wanted to use the same noise to make it a concluding point. Overall, with this project I thought that my draft was a lot different from my final draft. I made improvements from my last one, even small improvements such as the cut outs that made my final audio story stronger.